The clock ticks slowly
the seconds pass by
My heart is somewhat aching
and I know why
Darkness there'll be
Is this a part of me?
The moments last longer
I see sparkling everywhere
The flame in my heart burns
Thunder, it's there
Ashes and Glee
It's everything I'll see
Sketches on my paper
deviate their own way
I concentrate on what
the doodled words say
Someday I'll see
What has become of me
Finally it's over
In front of the one, I'm glad
That I finally had the courage
and these the words are I have said
I want you to be
that missing part of me.
Raven
©2008-2009 ~storywriter-raven
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Well, I just wrote it, don't think it's as good as I wanted it to be..
Did also much editing on this one.. haven't done that before actually.. not much then.. xD
Hope you like it, comments are welcome
Did also much editing on this one.. haven't done that before actually.. not much then.. xD
Hope you like it, comments are welcome
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Dit gedicht zorge ervoor dat ik eindelijks die stap nam bij iemand
Dankje denk ik dan xD
ps.SUSHI!!!
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